Selasa, 13 November 2012


This is my essay project.. I not banned Korean Artist but this is only argumentative essay I made... lets enjoy to read this :P.. give comment and correction if I miss typing.. (^_*)


Why Korean Artist Should be Banned in Indonesia?

Korean artist have become phenomenal in this time. Nowadays, many people know about Korean artist especially boyband and girlband such as, SUJU, SNSD, Big Bang, 2ne1, etc. They are very popular among young people. I believe that many people love Korean artist and give good respond for them. Why do many people love Korean boyband and girlband? Because there are many advantages that we will get from them. I realized that many people love Korean artists because most of them are beautiful and handsome. Korean artist look very fashionable in every concert they have. The first advantage is can increase our national income from ticket tax that they are hold concert. The second advantage is When Korean artists come to Indonesia to hold the concert, they can entertain all of their fans in Indonesia. And the last advantage is fans of Korean artist in Indonesia will get experience after meeting with other fans and share anything about their favorite Korean artist.
            Even though have many advantages, Korean artist also have many disadvantages. Why Korean artists especially boyband and girl band should be banned to hold concert in Indonesia? It is because there are many negative impact for Indonesian society especially for young people. The first disadvantage, when Korean artists come to Indonesia for concert, I believe most of Korean fans in Indonesia will buy the ticket and they will spend a lot of money to buy the ticket. For example Bing Bang ticket concert started from RP 750.000, - until RP 2.400.000, - and you must queue for hours to get the ticket, that is only wasting time. You can do another important things rather than queuing for the ticket. The second disadvantage, beside the price of ticket spend a lot of money, Korean artists can give bad impact for young people’s life style especially in fashion. Because Korean artists especially girlband usually wear the cute accessories, mini dress, mini skirt and hot pants. The young people will adopt the style of their Korean idol so, they will lose their own indentity. The third disadvantage, beside spending a lot of money for the ticket and give bad impact for life style, most of fanatic fans will buy all stuffs about their favorite Korean artist such as CD, poster, jacket, light stick, photo album, magazine, pin, etc for their collection. Buying all stuffs about Korean artists are not cheap, they must spend a lot of money. Most of them are expensive stuffs, I think all of those stuffs are not important things. Honestly, they should manage their money to buy something which is more important. The last disadvantage is it can decrease popularity of Indonesian music because most of young people will more pay attention to Korean song rather than their Indonesian music.
As a conclusion, Korean artist give advantages and disadvantages for us. The advantages of Korean artist are increase our national income from ticket tax, entertain their fans and the fans will get experience from after meeting other fans. In the other hand, Korean artist also give disadvantages such as spend a lot of money for the ticket, bad impact for life style and spend a lot of money for buying Korean artists stuffs. So, all of the issues are depends on people personal point of view. People should understand which one is important.

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